Headlining a show in Staten Island for 8 audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gk8-VhZpPYc
3m27s Good improvised line / flirtation
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cyTUd_u-QP8
1m57s Try making this into a one liner that’s delivered like a throw away
3m07s Kill the “hategasm” line and reword the ending of the joke
3m27s Yes that’s too far
4m40s Try to keep a straight face on that line
7m59s Don’t step on the laugh
Part 3
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=84DL_TSulSs
0m15s If I stumble on a word, stumble for longer to make it fun
3m23s Throw in another line to keep punching it. After “I’m a pimp, I won’t do that” I can throw in “If someone tried that on me, I’d throw her out the house”
4m01s Add “and I was like” before “Everyone in New York”
Overall: Not great, but I had fun with the tiny crowd and did 25 minutes. I need stop over acknowledging when things aren’t going great. And I also need to keep my internal thought processes to myself instead of explaining the psychology behind jokes.
