Performance Critique: August 4c

Late night music and comedy

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oRUIdUtETgI

1m27s Change the delivery on the friends line

3m54s Stay pointing at/addressing one specific person for the propose line

8m40s Tighten the wording, or at least make it flow better

9m19s Don’t use bottle twice in the sentence, say liter the first time

10m24s Make the motion more obvious that I’m referring to my face

11m08s Try “they’re all smiling and happy, cause they just got my new DVD”

Overall: Great set of mostly new material, especially considering it was 2am.

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