A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d8Rv_lCjVNM
0m49s Slow down on “take your job” pausing between each word
3m28s Try “I realize it sounds harsh, but I’ll justify it.”
7m01s Find a better wording for all this
7m56s The Shaq line doesn’t make sense
9m18s Reword to “chugs a liter of wine a night, straight out of the bottle”
Overall: Weak for a music mic, but one or two new bits towards the start did ok.
