Opening for 30 minutes for a sketch group
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7kobtGCAqpc
0m01s True story, the tape started 5 seconds after I got brought up
2m35s Nice improvised callback
6m07s Pause before “So I just”
6m56s Great job addressing a heckle and turning it into a win for me
7m42s That’s the best response this line has gotten
8m20s Don’t step on the laughs
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tqjM8OPGyIw
0m59s Say “I told you we’d get to the groaning part”
1m10s Add “cause she’s instant play”
2m07s No need for the “so drunk you forget” line
3m59s Good improvised line
4m49s Cut the last 50 seconds
7m40s This is a b joke, it needs a rewrite
8m32s Say the line more playfully
8m45s Too mean, no need for that
Part 3
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ffqil6r9Klk
0m09s Weird transition question, wasn’t even a full sentence
1m29s I need more bombing lines for a longer set, or more quality material
2m15s Good laugh considering I thought I lost them
2m28s I need another line after “shit happens”
3m10s The 57 point inspection needs to be setup clearer
3m22s Get rid of the brakes line
6m35s I should’ve gone to the second part of the joke about “cancel relationship” as I was getting more sympathy
7m17s I don’t need the “cause” there
9m29s Don’t react angrily, say it jokingly
Part 4
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Pevo4Z0ANhs
1m08s I blew the line
1m16s Bail out of the joke if a big punch line is blown that confuses two future punch lines
Overall: I did 31 minutes without any notes and did great for the first 15. I wasn’t as prepared as I could’ve been because I was just remembering jokes as I went along after 20 minutes and too many of them in a row were about sex. I also remembered why I rarely do my older material…
