Going up first at my Queens show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0lKrnVV_nUg
0m13s There was an actual infant in the audience
1m18s Move the location of my hands between each line and make it a Venn diagram
1m59s Perfectly played
2m47s Try doing a “pow pow” mini gun motion
3m48s Cut the previous thirty seconds about midnight sails and all
4m30s Pause after “and the yellow ones”, there’s an extra laugh there
6m05s Hammer it home by going “the Hitler mustache ok, but back of the van is no good?”
7m39s Rephrase to “actual chart in her bedroom like an NFL draft room”
8m00s Cut down a few of these examples
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CcpYaDIW-bI
1m18s This joke needs some work, but at least it didn’t turn the crowd, which it could’ve
Overall: I did mostly new or rewritten material and it went over fairly well. I need to cut the second half of the millionaire joke and the ID’s joke needs rework.
