Performance Critique: August 30

The 9:30 Show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yA9Qav5ouiE

1m25s Always nice when I can start with over a minute of off the cuff/playing off the room stuff

2m20s Add this to the joke

4m08s Nice improvised line

6m17s Put 200% at the end of a sentence

7m05s The backwards dating needs tightening/rework

Overall: Good set, the anti-marriage bit is getting tighter, the stuff right after it still needs lots of work.

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