Performance Critique: August 29

Hosting the Sunday writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bPKkEfGx7Pc

1m34s Get rid of the earthworm thing

2m12s Make that an actual sentence

3m22s It should be the same form of “exploiting” twice in a row

3m33s Get rid of the boomshakalaka

Overall: These newer jokes need some rework but have potential.

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