The 8PM show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ku4cOQvQjGA
2m39s Drag out “freezing” for longer
4m06s Go into the difference between “stories” and “jokes” for a little
4m38s Pause for the “oooo” to stop before getting to the next one, or else it feels like I’m trying to barrel through it
4m55s It should be “turn it down a notch” not “go back a notch”
5m39s Great job calling out the situation
5m48s Go into him apologizing more
6m46s That joke needs a stronger ending
7m08s Hold that last pose for longer
7m42s I’m going too fast
8m05s Good job ending on a big laugh
Overall: Good but I had three jokes that got “oooos” and I didn’t fully respond to it. Since a lot of my jokes walk the line, I need to figure out a way to always be ready for the Oooo / groan….
