Performance Critique: August 27a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cVglj7XvyBU

0m33s I could’ve added, “no, unemployed and interviewing?”

1m17s Try, “she’d probably come back with a shareholders report”

4m11s Get rid of “I got it from Ikea”

5m50s I need to make it clearer that I’m combining cell phone plans and child adoptions

Overall: I did newer jokes and they’re getting there but need some rewriting

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