The 8pm show with about 20 audience members
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bobkkyeK-MU
0m07s Playing off of the MC
4m17s Nice additional improvised lines
4m44s Thirty seconds of improvised lines that got laughs, wish I was always this loose
8m29s Weird compliment, but I’ll take it
9m23s Nice line
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3_Eo3QIF5yE
0m47s Try “dragging” instead of “hauling”
1m50s Change the Igor Hunchback line
2m18s Not good for the bit if improvised line is by far the biggest laugh in the bit
3m08s Instead of “doing this” say “talking about this”
4m18s Nice when a newer joke does well
4m35s Cut the green card line
6m08s Nice additional line
6m22s Looks like I found a way to get into the “scary is…” bit without doing the psycho character
7m16s It got a good laugh but only half the room
7m43s That line doesn’t make sense there cause I got a decent laugh
Overall: Great eighteen minute set. The dad custody Kazaam and anit-marriage bits didn’t do as well as my more polished bits and need some rework, but the set flowed real nice and some other newer things worked.
