Performance Critique: August 26b

Late night music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EcllEZBItIQ

1m38s Go into him trying this more, and make more jokes on it

2m59s Go back a line in the joke so everyone is still with me

3m24s Make the bottom of the bar graph clearer

3m59s Get rid of “I got it at Ikea”

4m57s Weird that this is the response it’s getting, I need to change these lines cause this isn’t a joke intended to get an “oooo”

5m35s It might funnier if I don’t say “I like your shoes” before doing the joke

8m10s Say “Cats” again before saying “the musical”

9m00s Instead of “horrified” say “upset”

9m14s Longer pause after “never forget”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EhbgUnCrGlU

0m33s Say “hazard lights”

Overall: Working out newer jokes, the second part of the millionaire joke needs a lot of rework and the ID thing needs some work but has potential.

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