Performance Critique: August 24b

A bar show for about ten people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aA4NCRnvH3A

0m28s Terrible wind sound all set, ugh

3m02s Good job milking the sadness

5m11s Laundry line is a keeper, stuff before needs tightening

5m33s Make the act out more of a tantrum for the “we have to” part

Overall: Eh set, tighten the new material.

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