Performance Critique: August 24a

A music and comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JHDN7N_tG7w

0m51s Better to pick a specific person than everyone

3m29s Hit the sentence smoother

4m42s It should be “who taught you to make deductions like THAT”

6m44s Think of different angles to hit this with because the premise is funny

7m26s Point to self on “someone”

7m50s Say “OMG” instead of “oh my god”

8m18s Don’t stutter the sentence

Overall: Weak set, the anti-marriage material needs tightening

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