Hosting my Queens show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tGMtGt8KuTM
0m50s Awkward but necessary to get it to stop
1m36s Good call, go into it further
2m24s More emphasis on “MY”
3m22s Make a downhill motion with my hand on “flushed down the toilet”
4m22s Hit the “I’m not in an office as an animator” harder you can’t animate outside
5m05s Add “so you will be working in IT”
7m11s Don’t lean back on a punch line
8m11s Scan my eyes from side to side more
9m34s Change “catch” to “watch”
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qOKeGQQ76w8
2m52s Cut or change these last two lines
3m18s It’s supposed to be “easy to service”
Overall: Good job only doing one joke in the first five minutes of hosting. My energy level could still be a little higher but I did a better job of talking to the crowd.
