Another mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lm0aks0Wfno
1m43s Cut out “but” at the start of the sentence
3m05s Say “some” instead of “most”
6m55s Add “and it can’t come soon enough”
8m28s Cut the pile of cocaine line
Overall: Weak response, but good to say 9 minutes of reworked material out loud. I need to cut this stuff down to 4-5 minutes and then it might be funny.
