Performance Critique: August 21

The 8PM Show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VnATVFTzPgw

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VnATVFTzPgw

0m22s Change my voice for that act out

0m36s It doesn’t make sense to say “kid” and then have him use my name

1m08s It was supposed to be “a soft degree”

2m36s Have a funnier call out

3m27s Try “til you throw a number, or a dollar”

5m24s Say it’s like “dancing waterfalls” or “jumping waterfalls”

5m51s Say my line of “I’m a stand up comic, not a stand up guy” when that joke doesn’t land

Overall: Average and some wording needs to be adjusted.

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