Performance Critique: August 20a

Going first on the 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6hhCxbX8HDA

0m29s Don’t step on the laugh

1m31s More emphasis on “disappointdar”

2m35s Nice improvised line

5m01s More emphasis on “your”

6m12s He did actually wink at me

7m27s Word this sentence better

8m18s Callback totally missed, probably don’t do the face before the I hate your hair

Overall: Okay for opening a show. I got consistent laughs, but they were consistently small. And I need a smoother way to go into my last bit.

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