Performance Critique: August 18c

Going last at 2am at a music/comedy mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N0ph31Pgzt0

0m40s Add a “he blew out his arm” reference

5m50s Point at self during the whole line

6m48s Add emphasis on “after”

9m47s No need for “fundraisers” end the sentence at “synagogues”

Overall: Weird set, mostly weak with a couple of good laughs.

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