Performance Critique: August 18a

A writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=88yDMSOrBbg

0m50s Smile on the foreigners line

3m48s Say Shaq not Celtics, that’s not a ready association, or better yet, don’t say anything at all

5m26s Maybe slight reword to “cause I WANNA look pretty in a white dress”

Overall: Okay for a mic

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