A music and comedy mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fC1RQdIiY0E
3m28s Enunciate “love” more
4m44s There might be a better word than “sadness”
5m37s Add a few words, “then a year later, it turns into…”
6m35s Reword the tizzy to something that’s a closer parallel to a marriage argument
7m38s Great yet horrible improvised line, figure out a way to put it into the act
8m01s Say “too fast” not “too far”
8m18s Change the delivery on “I know, right” like it’s the most obvious thing in the world
9m05s Every night should be at the start of the sentence
Overall: Good set, first seven minutes of pretty new material went really well. Could’ve ended stronger.
