Performance Critique: August 17

Hosting my Queens show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-u3KY1a_np0

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-u3KY1a_np0

0m34s Go into the “I’m not sure what my tattoo means” for longer

1m15s Mimic her pronunciation and see if she says everything in that accent or just her name

1m58s Try changing this to “I’m hitting MY goal 100% of the time”

4m22s I haven’t asked the audience any questions yet

7m05s I should’ve started with addressing the environment

7m58s Do different poses

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jc6Lkmpw0vc

1m14s I notice I’m not higher energy than I usually am, and I need to be when hosting

2m18s Doing time between comics

3m02s Cut the clip to wall line

4m00s All my improvised lines are getting bigger laughs than the material, so I should improvise more, especially when hosting

6m18s Great call back

8m15s Nice try getting the couple to stop sucking face

8m56s Rework the first two lines of the shoes joke

Overall: Not great but not terrible. I need to go way higher in my energy and delivery when hosting.

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