Performance Critique: August 15a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i0dAfU7YFs0

1m35s It should be “buddy” not “friend” cause that’s what I said earlier

2m48s Reword to “but he doesn’t take anything cause he realizes those Kazaam DVDs…”

3m16s Make the whole sentence past tense

3m29s Decent improvised tag

4m41s Change the hand motion to something else

4m55s Change “brag” to “show off”

Overall: Good for a mic. The new marriage bit went over decently well.

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