Performance Critique: August 14a

Hosting the writer’s mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pcY-lVr-ih8

1m08s Say “look it into the glove” not “watch it into the glove”

2m01s More emphasis on “and”

3m15s Change “the line for bread” to “bread line”

Overall: Decent for opening a mic. New anti-marriage bit at the end has potential.

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