Performance Critique: August 14b

The 8PM Show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lCdH_po2wOY

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lCdH_po2wOY

0m21s Better to ask “really, that’s an O?” instead of telling them

1m03s Rephrase to “that means four years of your life weren’t flushed down the toilet”

2m42s Put more emphasis on “freezing”

3m28s I should’ve added one more comment

4m45s Get rid of “your”

Overall: Good but not great set, the Netflix joke went really well to close.

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