Performance Critique: August 13

The 8pm show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lrSFP23vHQU

0m24s Combining the words and hand motion doesn’t work

1m20s Make it sound more like a statement

4m41s That’s the best the immigrant joke has done to date

8m15s Milk the head down for longer

9m17s Don’t bumble the delivery mid sentence, it’ll ruin the punch line

Overall: Good set, new stuff worked fairly well until I stumbled on a line towards the end

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