Performance Critique: August 13b

A 6:30 Show for 8 or 10 people

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Du9cD0ReDVQ

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Du9cD0ReDVQ

0m49s Do the sound for longer, or better yet don’t do this part of the joke

3m04s Add the word “either” after “my mom doesn’t like that joke”

3m30s I forgot the second half of the line, it should be “I told my mom I’d do modeling and commercials”

4m00s Keep moving my hips the whole time for this character

Overall: Weak. I should’ve went back to flirting with the girls once material wasn’t getting me anywhere.

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