An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kzav3gcPhQ0
0m59s No need for the “it’s not it’s intended purpose” line
1m23s Change my left hand motion to make it like she’s knocking me away from her mid section
2m00s Pause after “www”
2m38s Pick either “drunk” or “high” no need for both
3m10s Cut the bar graph of rates line
4m52s Kill the porn star plumber example
Overall: I tried out rewritten versions of old jokes, and while the room was kinda dead, it still helps to watch it and see what parts don’t sound right
