Performance Critique: August 11c

Another bar show

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3fQrXxzZZHA

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3fQrXxzZZHA

0m24s Ask a little more politely

1m05s Cut “use it as a phone” and “it’s a lousy baseball”

2m45s Say “challenged” instead

3m01s Don’t talk over it, acknowledge it and say “that’s not even the funny part”

4m35s Great improvised lines

5m12s I should’ve have forced my way back into this joke after the interruption

6m45s That’s funny

9m28s This part is much weaker than the first part of the Yelp joke

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VGANwmzukjU

0m48s I’m stepping on laughs, slow down on this joke

Overall: Good set and good job messing around with the audience. The second part of the Yelp joke needs work.

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