Performance Critique: August 11a

A mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kig_ZFVw4rw

1m47s No need for the word “tomorrow”

1m52s No need for the line “this clip is going straight to your Facebook wall”

3m26s Reconsider the “bar chart of their prices” line

4m58s Don’t change “car salesman” and “sell cars” it has to be the exact same line

Overall: The newer versions of the Netflix joke and the Cum Like You joke are getting there, but the cool nerd concept needs work

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