MCing a bar show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ajyBEHMlSnI
1m48s I could also go with “Ill, Michigan? How far away from Detroit is that?”
2m32s If I had remembered I said Jersey, and called back to it, it would’ve hit well
6m10s Add “he’s probably texting his coke dealer”
7m32s Nice line
7m53s Even better would be to say “between the four of you, you have one job and are from Minnesota”
9m15s Doing time between comics
12m13s Tighten to “he goes thru your stuff but doesn’t take anything because…”
13m19s Make the friend’s voice more different from my own
13m49s Decent improvised line
Overall: Good job with the upfront time mixing in the crowd work with material. The in between comics stuff could’ve gone better though.
