Doing a check spot on the 8pm show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lTemYGZVTxk
1m12s Say “then I asked” instead of “then I was like”
1m30s Reword to “I wish adults were as honest as kids”
2m34s Acknowledging it’s a clever not funny joke seems to work
3m31s Change “become” to “be”
4m32s Good job dealing with the “ooh” I could’ve gotten to it sooner though
Overall: Very good for a check spot
