Performance Critique: April 28b

Going first on a 9PM show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8oW8MyWl0O0

1m15s Good job doing a minute of noticing the room before going into the jokes and getting good laughs from it

3m00s Good save line

4m41s Good callback to previous crowd work

5m21s If breaking up the two lines with “you’re like, I do” the second line should be, “I need choking to fall in love” instead of “I need it to fall in love”

5m59s I can add in “this is the only time I can confidently say, mine is bigger than yours”

7m40s Lost them on this joke

Overall: Good crowd work to start and some of the jokes hit decent, but I lost them on the last joke.

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