Performance Critique: April 22

An afternoon fundraiser

httpv://youtu.be/5r2_Kzeo9g4

0m33s Should’ve tried commenting on the room a little more

2m18s Hit “being” harder

2m45s Get more negative body language for “I see most of you are on her side”

4m22s Nice improvised line about “the Friendly’s staff”

5m41s Smile on the “awww”

6m19s Sell the “yeah right” look for longer

10m13s I should have a stock bit for when someone doesn’t have a safe word

10m59s Nice little improvised line

Overall: Ok for an afternoon set, but a lot of the jokes need shortening.

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