Early evening open mic with five comics
0m32s Change “you’ve” to “you”
5m19s No need to say “I wanted you to know”
6m23s Don’t switch it up, if I planned to do all my new mom jokes, I should stick with it
7m11s Sound more dreamy about the statistics, like they’re amazing
8m48s Kill the cycle part of the joke
Part 2
0m46s Do some record scratching sounds before yelling out “remix”
Overall: The netflix joke seems to be ready for a real audience, and some of the other jokes need more tweaking.
Early evening open mic with five comics
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uEot4GDtUXA
0m32s Change “you’ve” to “you”
5m19s No need to say “I wanted you to know”
6m23s Don’t switch it up, if I planned to do all my new mom jokes, I should stick with it
7m11s Sound more dreamy about the statistics, like they’re amazing
8m48s Kill the cycle part of the joke
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4cnFk8MkDXw
0m46s Do some record scratching sounds before yelling out “remix”
Overall: The netflix joke seems to be ready for a real audience, and some of the other jokes need more tweaking.
