Performance Critique: April 21b

A restaurant basement show for 10-12 people
2m02s This version of the “cancel relationship” joke isn’t working as well as the previous version
2m26s Instead of “I have a confession to make” it should be “you should know”
6m27s My lips look rather awkward while I’m tap dancing, try smiling
7m37s I’m glad this semi call-back worked
8m44s Change “women” to “sexual partners”
Overall: I had consistent (albeit small) laughs throughout. The newer Russian mom stuff seems to be working in front of real crowds.

A restaurant basement show for 10-12 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jQ6f6NgSj28

2m02s This version of the “cancel relationship” joke isn’t working as well as the previous version

2m26s Instead of “I have a confession to make” it should be “you should know”

6m27s My lips look rather awkward while I’m tap dancing, try smiling

7m37s I’m glad this semi call-back worked

8m44s Change “women” to “sexual partners”

Overall: I had consistent (albeit small) laughs throughout. The newer Russian mom stuff seems to be working in front of real crowds.

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