An open mic
1m02s Change “this great bit” to “this gem”
1m52s Change “no chess prodigy” to “not chess prodigy”
3m29s No need for the “with or” part of the punch line
5m54s Don’t say “and” on the second example
Overall: Working out newer stuff, all of it still needs adjustments but none of it needs to be completely forgotten…
An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_9tg1-5MWqs
1m02s Change “this great bit” to “this gem”
1m52s Change “no chess prodigy” to “not chess prodigy”
3m29s No need for the “with or” part of the punch line
5m54s Don’t say “and” on the second example
Overall: Working out newer stuff, all of it still needs adjustments but none of it needs to be completely forgotten…
