Performance Critique: April 20c

A backroom bar show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nzAhuyx4Qi0

1m15s Instead of “arms crossed like someone” try “arms crossed, I guess someone”

2m30s Good improvised moment that I should try to reuse

3m58s It’s funnier if I turn to the side before saying it

5m40s The better line is “if you keep saying wow”

7m30s Cut the dog foot and knees lines

Overall: Mediocre with a couple of big laughs.

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