Performance Critique: April 19

Late night music mic

httpv://youtu.be/GJjfxluYFfg

4m08s Rewrite the previous minute

5m16s To streamline it, if someone else yells out a safe word, they can become the new sadness member of the audience

6m27s Need a better punch line

7m00s Try saying the dead lines while smiling

Overall: Mediocre. Worked out a bunch of rewrites, that still need rewrites.

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