Performance Critique: April 18b

A bar show for 8 or 10 people

httpv://youtu.be/zfG75AebyqA

0m32s Could’ve gone with “so only one of you lays pipe in Thailand”

2m54s Say “some of you” instead of “a few of you”

3m18s If going from “Russian prison camp” to Blade, I can repeat the word “prison”

3m42s Move the eyes around more

4m48s Weird angle of leaning towards him

Overall: Weak set. I tried crowd work up front but should’ve gone back into it later on.

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