Performance Critique: April 18a

An open mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NrD-USwVvOM

1m27s Good sell on the snarkiness

2m14s Cut those two lines

4m58s Decent new save line

5m13s Change “throat” to “windpipe”

Overall: Decent for a mic. Newer stuff needs to be cut down.

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