Performance Critique: April 18

SundaWriter’s Mic
0m28s I’m doing the old part of the joke to setup the new parts
2m07s Add “nineteen” before “eighty-four”
2m38s I should try responding to the chess prodigy line before continuing
3m14s Say “comedy class” not class
3m29s Say “truck driver school” stronger
3m47s After the dance say, “So I’m in the market for a new mom”
Overall: The new mom material has potential but needs some tinkering and I need to figure out a way to get into new mom stuff without having to do the old stuff for two minutes.

Sunday Writer’s Mic

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8GQDUhyF2Sk

0m28s I’m doing the old part of the joke to setup the new parts

2m07s Add “nineteen” before “eighty-four”

2m38s I should try responding to the chess prodigy line before continuing

3m14s Say “comedy class” not class

3m29s Say “truck driver school” stronger

3m47s After the dance say, “So I’m in the market for a new mom”

Overall: The new mom material has potential but needs some tinkering and I need to figure out a way to get into new mom stuff without having to do the old stuff for two minutes.

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