Performance Critique: April 17a

Going first at a bar show for 5 people

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pmZ4gbzqCe0

1m44s Try crowd work at this point

5m08s This is a big laugh for this room

5m15s Make it “dog foot” instead of “dog feet”

7m19s Go to “really?” first if I get it right

9m00s I should’ve sat down in the chair

9m15s Crowd work is decent, might wanna keep the Friendly’s line

12m32s The worse I’m doing, the better that line does

16m04s Good improvised alliteration

18m32s Decent line

20m14s Put the hand down first, then lean forward

Overall: I did over twenty minutes without notes and stayed positive although I wasn’t getting much response.

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