The Saturday 8pm Show
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9OXjT8w8zFs
0m52s Started the next line a half second too soon and ate a laugh
1m48s I need a better celebration than “jackpot”
4m16s Don’t do the poke on “Berlin wall”
5m28s No need for the hand motion, but if I’m gonna do it, my finger should keep moving
7m08s This only needs one example, not three
8m48s Nice response
9m24s Keep the same voice throughout the question
Part 2
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tdmE67mrch8
0m22s Don’t even say “so anyway” just go straight to the next joke
0m40s Checks are getting dropped
1m45s Specify more, “you’re at a bar and you’re talking to a girl”
2m14s Deliver “that’s a lot of money” differently
2m38s Go further with the ripping it open act out
2m59s The wording is awkward, needs fixing
4m19s The neuroeconomics joke hasn’t been working well at all
5m20s The previous thirty seconds were some of the most fun I’ve ever had on stage
7m39s Do a better act out
8m14s Don’t laugh
8m57s I wasn’t planning on doing this joke, but I couldn’t remember any other jokes to do and I wasn’t sure how long I was going
Part 3
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tsZJJzHYC3M
0m12s After, “that’s cool, not a big deal” I should’ve added “I have a special escape door”
1m07s Always nice when a callback works to end the set
Overall: I did 21 minutes at a real club. Sure 6 to 10 of those minutes were a check spot, but I successfully cleared the checks and got the audience back to listening to me and I ended my set strong. When I went up I didn’t know how much time I’d be doing because we didn’t know how long checks would take and when the last act would show up, so the jokes weren’t really in much order after the first eight minutes, but I was able to keep doing material. Also, the girl almost clapping about New Years and then stopping herself is one of the funniest things that’s ever happened. I should’ve gone back to that more.
