Performance Critique: April 16b

The 8PM show

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DaA3hIqhlnI

0m07s Give it another second for the clapping to die down

2m47s Don’t do the thesaurus joke if the previous joke doesn’t do great

3m23s Might make sense to instantly respond “I didn’t even know Shalom, I was like”

4m23s This is why I didn’t address it at the start, it could throw off the flow of the joke

5m02s Hit the line snarkier

5m30s Good improvised end

Overall: Decent but not great set. I purposefully avoided doing my split personality act because it was a fundraiser show and those crowds tend to dislike edgy material

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