An open mic with 6 or 7 comics in the room
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9wvl4k_ovSs
0m10s I was introduced as “the headliner” which at an open mic, means, the last comic. But I pretended like I was a real headliner by saying “clap it up for all the other comics” so it got a laugh
1m06s The background noise is in another room because this is in a bar, I can’t control or really address that background noise
2m52s Put more emphasis on “kills”
3m26s Try slowing down and emphasizing each of the letters in PhD
5m14s Do the model voice right away, not after the first line
5m58s I’m trying to reword this joke
Overall: I worked out the new version of my “A” material, I just needed to say it out loud in front of a few people
