Performance Critique: April 15c

A music open mic at 2am

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pE9kWdAHWTM

1m18s I ignored the yell out cause responding would ruin the rhythm of the joke and then went back to address him later

2m55s Interesting how the applause didn’t start until 3 seconds after my punch line

4m12s I’ve found this is the best way to address the Carrot Top thing

4m26s I don’t need the mom character to always be poking

5m47s Kill the “disappoint your parents” joke, if it doesn’t get a laugh during this set, it’s really not funny

6m52s Kill the Fred Astaire joke

7m31s Don’t even say “there’s no joke there”

8m18s Such a random “I like you” it’s hysterical

9m20s Do the “I’m a stand up comic, not a stand up guy” line after the “actually love my dad” bit, not “did it get too real?”

Part 2

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8T9OxaQETR8

0m54s Perfect delivery on the last line

Overall: I love this place. I always done well and it’s an honest reaction, so when something doesn’t work here, I get rid of it or change it.

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