A small show in a restaurant basement
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ab8L3BpxTC0
0m17s Say “you spend” before listing days of the week
1m30s Pause longer after “yeah”
2m38s Do the j-date joke before the suicide joke
4m04s Too much poking, and not in the same place, figure out a way not to over do it
4m54s It should be “Hi, how are you today, we’re just wondering, what’s your opinion on…”
5m48s Explain the difference between Facebook and Yelp more
7m22s Hit “tap dancing” harder
7m31s Needs a better punch line
8m12s Instead of “everyone” it should be “you all”
Overall: My good stuff did fairly well, my newer stuff still needs work.
