An open mic
httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f1Bby6XlZCE
0m38s This is a joke strictly for open mics, it lets me see what the maximum level of laughs can be
1m48s Good job acknowledging the situation
2m59s Change rookie of the year to hall of fame
3m12s I don’t need the line “You don’t just put up these numbers”
3m48s Reword to “When did they stop teaching the fundamentals?”
4m11s Kill the sabermetrics stuff
6m14s Don’t use the word “joke”
6m38s Say “horrible” both with names and face
Overall: I was working new stuff out, which still need some work but I was really comfortable in acknowledging when things went off the deep end and making them funny.
