Performance Critique: April 12c

A late night music and comedy mic

httpv://youtu.be/uDHB5FPRo1Y

1m48s If the razor blades gets a reaction I should say “I see some of you have been there…”

2m54s Cut “free clinic chairs”

3m01s Say the questions were standard

3m24s Try “licensed physician” to change up from “doctor”

4m53s It should be “latex dick” instead of “latex condoms”

6m07s Change it to a girl’s voice

6m18s Cut “not hooking up with her again”

7m48s Cut the last thirty seconds

10m09s Say “internet connection” happier

Overall: Decent for working out a new bit at 1am. It needs to get a lot tighter though.

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