Performance Critique: April 26

This is the feedback mic I go to on Sundays. There was an actual audience at this mic for a change.

httpv://www.youtube.com/watch?v=boF432EylSc 

0m38s Perfect nod and eye brow raise. I’ve found this tends to make the laughs bigger 

1m17s It should be “your tubes are kinda large” not “huge” 

1m51s Someone said “that’s worse than the comedy” 

2m21s Snap my fingers before “that’s your first date” 

2m29s The “she gets the remote” part needs to be rewritten to something else 

3m17s No need to say “let it roll around” when they already laughed 

4m06s I started my question by looking at one person but ended it by looking at another, that shouldn’t happen 

4m22s Smile after “snuggle head” 

Overall: This was a great response considering it was an open mic and I received positive feedback afterwards. This was a four minute set in order to try to work out my callback / closer for “huge tubes”

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